The Writing Process: A Recipe for Analytical Papers

20 02 2009
  1. Idea generation:
    1. Brainstorming
    2. Outline
    3. Write introduction:

                                                          i.      Broad to narrow

                                                          ii.      Establish appropriate background information

                                                          iii.      Transitions

                                                          iv.      Focus: Strong coherent thesis!

 

  1. Organization:
    1. Of ideas:         logical, appropriate arrangement of the author’s thoughts, clarity, tone is appropriate for:

                                    i.      Audience

                                    ii.      Purpose of essay (to inform, to persuade, to entertain, etc.)

  1.  
    1. Formatting:     MLA style, works cited, no/minimal grammar/spelling, mistakes, use of “I” statements is limited and appropriate, careful usage of personal pronouns, no contractions (i.e. don’t, shouldn’t, I’m, she’s, etc)

 

  1. Description:
    1. PIE:                       

                                                       Point

                                                       Illustrate

                                                       Evaluate

  1.  
    1. Appropriate transitions

Topic and concluding sentences

Connection/fluidity between paragraphs

Strong concrete examples!!!

Show the audience through your description rather than telling them!!!

Strong support of thesis!

Thesis is clear and easily identifiable

Logical conclusion which restates and expands on ideas of thesis

Structure resembles Key Hole Diagram: broad to narrow

 

  1. Analysis:
    1. Paper clearly answers “so what?” question for the audience (as to the significance of what is being argued in the essay and its relevance to the audience and author)
    2. Makes author stretch their boundaries in order to learn
    3. Enhances knowledge of topic/thought process of author and reader
    4. Incorporates ideas addressed in class
    5. Expresses the author’s own ideas regarding the reading and their research and clearly defines the author’s terms for their argument
    6. Challenges author and reader!!

 

Handout created by Caitlin Hennessey for the Center of Academic Excellence, Spring 2009.





Successful Reading Strategies When Approaching English Literature:

16 02 2009

Strategies for approaching an English text:

 

1. Familiarize yourself with your text:

 

            Open your textbook and spend about 10 to 20 minutes trying to familiarize yourself with the format and content of the text.

— Is there a table of contents? An introduction, foreword, or preface? An index? A bibliography or works cited page? A glossary? Appendices? How is your text organized?

 

— Often in an anthology of scholarly journal articles or in compilations/selections of authors’ works there will be a table of contents which will show you how the anthology or work is broken down. Essentially this contents is an at a glance overview of what the anthology contains and should explain whether the organizational method is by author, subject matter, date, etc. A table of contents also usually provides the reader with page numbers of where the work can be found within the text and is traditionally located towards the front of the text itself.

    An index is usually found at the back of the text and often contains page numbers of key terms, figures, dates, subjects, etc. which are referred to in the text. Indices are convenient tools particularly when you are browsing a book as a possible source for an essay or research paper. This is because an index allows the reader to search at a glance through the text and directs you only to pages within the text in which the subject terms of your search may be found. However, it is advisable to still comb through the text in order to determine what pages are in fact useful to you because the index will only list pages where that subject is mentioned directly by name rather than in association with other similar or related terms.

    With an introduction, foreword, or preface, an author or editor of a work often uses these sections of the text as an opening into the bulk content of the text. In this section, subject material may be introduced as well as background information on the author, the time period of the piece, and other additional information which the author believes may be of use to readers. These sections can be similar to a table of contents because introductions tend to provide an overview of the author’s layout of organization for the rest of the work and are traditionally found in the front of the text after the table of contents.

    A glossary is similar to an index with the exception that most of the terms contained within the glossary would either reference the page where a definition of the term can be found in the text or the page in the glossary actually provides the definition of the term for the reader. This can be a useful tool because it allows the reader to understand the parameters of the term being used by the author within the same context as the author may understand it.

    A bibliography or works cited page is usually at the end of particular essays or works by an author within an anthology and are used to identify and refer to the primary and secondary sources where the author had used in developing their own writing. These pages are extremely useful when writing a research paper or literary essay because it provides the reader with additional source material on particular subjects which you can look up for yourself to further your own research.

    Appendices are similar in function to an index but may contain additional information which may not have been provided in the main portion of the text which the author may still find useful for the reader’s understanding. Often maps, tables, diagrams, photographs, etc. may be presented in these sections and referred to by the author earlier in the text for the reader to reference as they read.

 

2. Close reading a text:

 

What is close reading?

—Close reading is a very careful, deliberate reading of a text. When a professor asks you to close read a text they are asking you to pay very close attention to what you are reading and to focus in on the little details and nuances of the text while you read instead of simply focusing at the face value of the words on the page. Close reading involves annotating a text in order to further your understanding of what you are reading through your interaction with the text. There are ways in which you can improve your ability to close read a text, some of which are listed below. These reading strategies will increase your ability to retain information, analyze, and understand working with literary texts in order to be a more accomplished, better prepared scholar of English. 

 

3. Annotating a text:

 

            What does it mean to annotate a text?

    Take notes on what you are reading

    Highlight, underline, circle, and/or mark up the text paying particular attention to points you find interesting, sections where you may disagree with the author or places where you have questions.

    Often your professor will ask you to look for particular concepts, ideas, or techniques while you read, so be sure to have those items written down on a sticky note or sheet of notebook paper to remind you while you read (you can also just keep it in mind while you read the text that you need to be looking for those items)

    When you annotate and close read a text, be sure to highlight or mark words or vocabulary which might be unfamiliar to you. Then go look them up in a dictionary or (for literary theory or terminology) a reference book is also useful. Knowing that a word is unfamiliar to you is not useful to you, but knowing what that unfamiliar word means and how to use it is useful! Therefore, do not be afraid to look up words you do not know. Looking up unfamiliar terms helps you to advance your learning and is applicable in every discipline.

3. Test your comprehension:

    After you have read through the text at least once for a good understanding of it, go back and read it again. This time try to follow the author’s train of thought as far as the techniques they used, or the coherence and clarity of their ideas.

    If what you are reading is an article in a scholarly journal or another form of literary essay writing, can you clearly locate the author’s thesis statement? Does the author consistently refer back to this main argument or do they deviate from their argument throughout the paper?

    It also helps to do a little research on the author you are going to read about. Spending five to ten minutes looking up little bits of the author’s history and other publications associated with that author will help you to have a better understanding of the context behind the literary work itself as well as enrich your comprehension and analysis of the author’s work. This skill is one which is necessary in a variety of disciplines and will greatly improve your ability to retain the material gleaned from the work because you will have invested more time, effort, interest and energy into what you are reading.

    Remember those questions your professor asked you to look at when examining the text? Go back and try to answer those questions. Are all of them able to be addressed? If some were not able to be addressed immediately following the reading, give yourself time to consider those questions and your possible responses to them. English literature tends to be highly analytical in nature and more often your responses will differ from your classmates because unlike in other disciplines, there is not always a concrete answer to questions pertaining to literature or writing.

    To help you better retain and understand the material you are reading try to paraphrase what the author may be saying in one paragraph, in a sentence, or as their overall theme/thesis for the paper. Write it down. Recording your thoughts about the text will help you remember it later when you need to recall it during class discussions.

    After you have read through the poem, play, narrative, memoir, essay, or other form of literary writing, try to answer this question of the text: “So what?” When asking this question, try to ponder out what the underlying significance is of this writing. What is the author trying to argue? Why should this argument matter? Is there something beyond the surface reading of the text which the author wants you to understand? How does this piece of literature relate to other works you have read? How does it relate to your own life? What does it say about human nature, languages, cultures, the world, etc? What in the text is revolutionary or original? What about the text really caught your interest and why? What makes the text so interesting, confusing or enlightening? Why does this matter? By answering these kinds of questions while you read your ability to grasp the overall significance of the text and improve your own synthesis and understanding of the material.

 

 

 

The guidelines provided above are a compilation of advice gleaned from professors, other students, tutoring, and my own study strategies through my academic study of English Literature. Throughout my academic career these strategies have proven to be a success in helping to advance my understanding of my major and other disciplines. I hope they continue to work well for you for years to come!

                                                                Caitlin F. Hennessey

                                                                     

                                                                CAE Writing Associate,

                                                                English and French Content Tutor





Useful Articles and Background Information on Literary Theory:

5 11 2008

Stivale, Charles J. “Mythologies Revisited: Roland Barthes and the Left.” Cultural Studies 16.3 (May 2002): 457-484. Academic Search Premier. EBSCOhost. Saint Joseph Coll. Lib., West Hartford, CT 30 Oct. 2008 <http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=aph&AN=7057371&site=ehost-live>.

 

            Relevant subject terms: Structuralism, Post-structuralism, Cultural Studies, Marxism, Exisistentialism, Semiotic codes, Roland Barthes

         U:\Stivale, Charles J. Mythologies Revisited Roland Barthes and the Left.pdf





Tami Fagan’s ENGL 104- Research Paper Step by Step

28 10 2008

Research paper

 

  1. Have an idea about what topic you would like to research
  2. Find your sources
  3. Read your sources
  4. Read your sources again
  5. Annotate your sources
  6. Ask yourself what point you want to make, what are you arguing? Create your thesis! (It will be a working thesis).
  7. Pull out best quotes and best facts/ideas from each (stuff you cannot paraphrase in better words)
  8. Create own separate note card for each quote and type it out (to make it easier when you are writing your paper later). Write out source/citation information on back of note card.
  9. Write down your thoughts, questions, comments, connections, reactions to quotes in your own words about the quote.
  10. Print out and cut out the quotes/thoughts and make a pile of the note cards according to their relevance to each other, categorize them by topic and connections you can make between them (not necessarily by article of origin).
  11. Organize these piles from weakest to strongest. This is the way you will be organizing your quotes throughout the essay: from weakest to strongest ideas (usually recommended).
  12. Weed out the weakest quotes, the ones you do not really need, that are not imperative to your argument.
  13. Once you have these note cards in the order that you want to present them, record an outline to be able to visually see the progression of your ideas and the structure of your essay/argument.
  14. Write your rough draft!
  15. Revise your essay! Dress up your language and correct grammar mistakes! Then get a second reader to look over your essay.
  16. Send paper to the CAE or to another reliable academic resource to check your paper for coherence of thought, etc.
  17. Write down your citations and make your works cited page. Check stylistic formatting of essay!

18. Make final revisions, including double checking that you have accomplished the task your professor set before you in the assignment. Print out a hard copy of your





English 104 Persuassive Essay: Resources for Political Election Topic

10 10 2008

Resources for Information on Presidential Election:

 

McCain’s Campaign Website:

http://www.johnmccain.com                                      

Obama’s Campaign Website:

http://www.barackobama.com                                   

The Hartford Courant Online:

http://www.courant.com/

The Philadelphia Inquirer Online:

http://www.philly.com/inquirer/

The Boston Globe Online:

http://www.boston.com/bostonglobe/

The Boston Herald Online:

http://www.bostonherald.com/

The Washington Post Online:

http://www.washingtonpost.com/

New York Times Online:

 http://www.nytimes.com                                          

Newsweek Magazine:

http://www.newsweek.com                                       

(US) National Public Radio News Online:

http://www.npr.org/

CNN News Online:

http://www.cnn.com/

BBC News:

http://news.bbc.co.uk                                                 

TV5 Monde (French News Station- word by word translation available, just click traduire link):

http://www.tv5.org                                                    

Le Monde Diplomatique October 2008 edition (French News- English edition): http://mondediplo.com/

French News, links to French newspapers and other informative sites (in French or English):

http://www.french-at-a-touch.com/French/french_language_news.htm

Le Figaro (International section) French News:

http://www.lefigaro.fr/international/index.php

El Mundo (Spanish Newspaper):

http://www.elmundo.es/elmundo/internacional.html

Spanish World News:

http://www.wn.com/s/spanish/                                   

Deutsche Welle (German newspaper translated in English):

http://www.dw-world.de/dw/0,,266,00.html

Spiegel Online (International edition of German newspaper translated in English):

http://www.spiegel.de/international/

Internet Public Library (great resource for online newspapers, journals, etc):

http://www.ipl.org/div/subject/browse/law00.00.00/ 

 

Basic background information of US Government Structure/Procedures:

Information on voting procedures, general background information:

http://usgovinfo.about.com/od/thepoliticalsystem/US_Political_System_and_Voting.htm

The Economist (information relating to the United States Economy, an overview):

http://www.economist.com/COUNTRIES/USA/profile.cfm?folder=Profile-Political%20Structure

America.gov (Information on Political Parties in the United States):

http://www.america.gov/st/washfile-english/2007/January/20070109140913HMnietsua0.1988794.html